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		Name: A Weekend In Las Venturas 
Type: Sprint/Speedtrap 
Location: Las Venturas 
Author: bamers
 
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                  	30-08-2017, 12:07
				 				
			
	
	
	
		
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		imo this map is very badly made, at start you dont need to use those gates or whatever this is, lamp on the right of the road, really? It looks bad for me. The arrows are placed in badly position. 
1:34 - 1:40, too much arrows for me. 
2:05 - those gates are unnecessary, u can use any kind of barrier like you used in 2:50 
3:40 - this s.w.a.t. car is unnecessary too, really. 
4:14 - this fragment reminds me of minecraft, so much blocky arrows 
and i dunno why you removed so much buildings, missing piramid, church, why?
  
Really?
 
The route is not bad, but you made a lot of mistakes. Imo it needs a lot of changes to be added.
 
      
      
		
	 
	 
	
	
	
  
  
              	
				
                  	30-08-2017, 12:14
				 				
			
	
	
	
		
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		 (30-08-2017, 12:07)Frixo Wrote:  imo this map is very badly made, at start you dont need to use those gates or whatever this is, lamp on the right of the road, really? It looks bad for me. The arrows are placed in badly position. 
1:34 - 1:40, too much arrows for me. 
2:05 - those gates are unnecessary, u can use any kind of barrier like you used in 2:50 
3:40 - this s.w.a.t. car is unnecessary too, really. 
4:14 - this fragment reminds me of minecraft, so much blocky arrows 
and i dunno why you removed so much buildings, missing piramid, church, why? 
 
 
![[Image: PAsh1Pt.png?1]](http://i.imgur.com/PAsh1Pt.png?1)  
 
Really? 
 
 
The route is not bad, but you made a lot of mistakes. Imo it needs a lot of changes to be added. 
thanks a lot for your valuable feedback sir.
 
at start, you mean the walls right? ok i will remove that if its that bad xD
 
lamps on the right road actually i just wanted to give signs to players about the limit of the roads. so should i change themm into other objects or just remove?
 
badly placed arrows..ok ill try to fix
 
- too much arrows on the highway right? so its better if no arrows then? ok ill remove them 
- 2:05..ok ill change the barrier
 
hahah, yeah so much blocky because the map editor got bugs i couldnt put curves arrows 
 
the missing buildings are because i accidentally delete some objects and i couldnt put them back.. 
like the misplaced lamps i put also ... xD
 
      
      
		
	 
	 
	
	
	
  
  
              	
				
                  	30-08-2017, 13:55
				 				
			
	
	
	
		
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		 (30-08-2017, 12:14)bamers Wrote:  1.lamps on the right road actually i just wanted to give signs to players about the limit of the roads. so should i change themm into other objects or just remove? 
 
2.badly placed arrows..ok ill try to fix 
 
3.- too much arrows on the highway right? so its better if no arrows then? ok ill remove them 
4.- 2:05..ok ill change the barrier 
 
5. hahah, yeah so much blocky because the map editor got bugs i couldnt put curves arrows  
 
6.the missing buildings are because i accidentally delete some objects and i couldnt put them back.. 
like the misplaced lamps i put also ... xD 
1. You can put it less, not that much   .
 
2. I mean, its ok, but you can use like 1 strip of arrow to make curve, just like in here:
  
3. You can just place some barriers or maybe traffics on side of the road to just fill the empty place. You dont have to use only arrows to make route ;p
 
4. ;p
 
5. I know what you're talking about, you know when the bug pops out, just click on the item and hold down ctrl+alt and rotate a little bit arrow, then use NAC system to make curve ;p.
 
6. You can put em back by searching them on the list of all object (they should be at the bottom of the list) selecting and clicking delete on keyboard, i wanted to put image in here but im too lazy ;p.
 
      
      
		
	 
	 
	
	
 
 
	
  
  
              	
				
                  	30-08-2017, 16:44
				 				
			
	
	
	
		
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		 (30-08-2017, 13:55)Frixo Wrote:   (30-08-2017, 12:14)bamers Wrote:  1.lamps on the right road actually i just wanted to give signs to players about the limit of the roads. so should i change themm into other objects or just remove? 
 
2.badly placed arrows..ok ill try to fix 
 
3.- too much arrows on the highway right? so its better if no arrows then? ok ill remove them 
4.- 2:05..ok ill change the barrier 
 
5. hahah, yeah so much blocky because the map editor got bugs i couldnt put curves arrows  
 
6.the missing buildings are because i accidentally delete some objects and i couldnt put them back.. 
like the misplaced lamps i put also ... xD  
1. You can put it less, not that much  . 
 
2. I mean, its ok, but you can use like 1 strip of arrow to make curve, just like in here: 
![[Image: MauvlSK.png]](http://i.imgur.com/MauvlSK.png)  
 
3. You can just place some barriers or maybe traffics on side of the road to just fill the empty place. You dont have to use only arrows to make route ;p 
 
4. ;p 
 
5. I know what you're talking about, you know when the bug pops out, just click on the item and hold down ctrl+alt and rotate a little bit arrow, then use NAC system to make curve ;p. 
 
6. You can put em back by searching them on the list of all object (they should be at the bottom of the list) selecting and clicking delete on keyboard, i wanted to put image in here but im too lazy ;p. 
1. ah i see, so i put too much xD 
2. i cant see the image..however, I managed it (i hope) 
3. very nice. what i did actually, changed the arrows placement..you can see in the new vid 
4. i changed it sir 
5. lol. i though i was the only one xD yeah, i could do it finally..thanks again 
6. i couldnt do this..so I just copied some buildings near there and put as replacment...just check it
 
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I have put the new video of updated, better (i hope) map in the main post above
 
      
      
		
	 
	 
	
	
	
  
  
              	
				
                  	31-08-2017, 11:36
				 				
			
	
	
	
		
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		Now it looks better than the old one,  GJ. There's wuite a few things that needs fix, but practice makes you better!  GL.
 
      
      
		
	 
	 
	
	
	
  
  
	
	
	
		
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		Declined, this map is not really of the quality required for nfssa. Arrows are overused, random barriers/lights/objects, and route itself is very long and uninspired.
 
      
      
		
	 
	 
	
	
	
  
	 
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